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It’s always nice to end on a good note. Dear Dumb Diary by Jim Benton is my third and final chick lit book for the month. I’m relieved to say that this one I like. Its girl-loves-boy plot has quirky twists, Jamie and her nemesis Angeline are likeable characters, and the diary-entry style is fun. And so I must thank my sister who first suggested Dear Dumb Diary to me.

As is true of many books aimed at a middle-school audience, main character Jamie has an attitude. That is evident from the very first page of Jamie’s diary: “Are you sure you’re supposed to be reading someone else’s diary?” The difference however between some other books and Dear Dumb Diary is that Jamie is likeable. She obeys her parents, entertains her baby cousin, hangs out with her friends, plays with her dog, and works hard at her schoolwork. Before you get the idea she’s boring, let me add that she also hates her mom’s food, uses her cousin to get out of trouble, dyes her hair to be popular, sneaks food that she doesn’t like to her dog, and ends up in the principal’s office for wise-cracking in class. Sounds like your average kid next door, doesn’t she? That’s one reason why I like her. Jamie is also endearing because she admits to her failures. She knows that her hatred for Angeline stems from jealousy. She knows that there isn’t any good reason for her to buy a beret, except she must have one because they’re the latest fad. And she knows that stealing Angeline’s permanent record is wrong, but also believes it would be wonderful to use its contents to expose Angeline for the terrible person she is. Except it’s also highly possible that Angeline has only one flaw: she is more popular than Jamie.

Benton creates a host of enjoyable and comical characters. You already know about Jamie. Then there is Cousin Eddy who is allergic to strawberries, but doesn’t have any problem eating homework or dog bones. There is also best friend Isabella who loves lipsticks but doesn’t seem to know anything about them. After rejecting about forty of them, she finally selects a jumbo variation which turns out to be roll-on deodorant. And there is Stinker. He’s Jamie’s dog. She likes to pretend to throw a ball for him and he likes to really run after it until he realizes he’s been faked out. After pretend-throws a ball over one hundred times, Stinker starts plotting his revenge. All these quirky situations help liven up the otherwise predictable plot of girl-loves-boy-but-has-no-chance-of-getting-him-because-of-popular-girl plot. Oh, and I can’t forget about Angeline. Although she steals Isabella’s ChocoMint Lip Smacker, Angeline wins me over because she is clumsy enough to tangle her long, beautiful hair in her backpack. Then there is the day she helps Jamie get out of trouble in class, proving she just might be nice.

Another thing that Benton does well is incorporate quirky situations. Diary of a Wimpy Kid featured a rotten cheese that invoked fear in all the middle school boys. Well, for Jamie, it’s a peach. Greg (of Wimpy Kid fame again) could rate where everyone fell on a popularity scale. In Dear Dumb Diary, Isabella proves herself the expert in these matters. Jamie figures one day Isabella will be a Professor of Popularity Science. Now before you start calling foul and accusing Benton of stealing ideas, I need to tell you that Dear Dumb Diary came out in 2004 — three whole years before the first Wimpy Kid book. So, Wimpy Kid just made those ideas famous. Besides, Benton writes about plenty of other bizarre situations. For example, after Angeline’s hair gets tangled in her backpack, she buys a beret to cover the resulting bald patch. If you think that’s tame, wait until you read about who steals the clipped hair and what happens to it. Then there’s the cafeteria meatloaf…. But really, some incidents you have to read about for yourself.

At the end of my little chick lit binge, what most amazes me is that the book I like best was written by a guy. According to his bio, Jim Benton began his career in a custom design t-shirt shop where he started creating his own characters. He has also designed greeting cards and drew illustrations for newspapers and magazines. Today he operates his own studio. Basically, he seems like an artist. Yet he does pretty well getting into the heads of middle-school girls. The next time I feel a chick-lit attack coming on, I’ll know whose books to seek out.

My rating? Read it: Borrow from your library or a friend. It’s worth your time.

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After an intense month of reading novels with intercultural themes, I thought a break, in the form of chick lit might be warranted. Turns out, I don’t always have smart ideas. In my second week of delving into light reading, I’m already flipping pages just to get to the end of another dang book. This time my reading adventures led me to Dork Diaries by Rachel Russell, which I checked out because it was being touted as the girls’ equivalent to the Wimpy Kid series. The latter I am proud to share with my students. As for Dork Diaries, the first book in the series was such a bore that I won’t be reading any further.

The first reason I don’t like Dork Diariess is the paint-by-numbers plot. It’s all about Nikki, who wants to be popular but is a dork. She desperately wants to be asked out by cute-guy Brandon, but thinks he is unaware of her existence. And oh, by the way, mean-girl Mackenzie hates Nikki’s guts. If you think this plot sounds anything like Baby Mouse, which I reviewed last week, give yourself a pat on the back. If you think the plot sounds anything like half the chick-lit books you have read in the last year or in your lifetime, you now know why I was so eager for Dork Diaries to end.

In all fairness, I’ll admit there are some scenes  between Nikki and Mackenzie that I halfway liked. For example, there is school Halloween dance. Although it came as no surprise that Mackenzie was voted chairperson for it, she did manage to temporarily shock a few people with her emotional resignation from the position. However, it soon became apparent, when all of Mackenzie’s friends also immediately quit, that she had an evil plan. You see, Mackenzie apparently has rich sponsors that enable her to afford to pay for an extravagant party. Yes, the clichés keep coming. Anyway, while I found this psychotic meanness on Mackenzie’s part over-the-top, I kind of enjoyed watching Nikki and her friends figure out how to save the day. If you think that revelation is a spoiler, I bet you can guess for yourself who asks Nikki to the dance. At least in Baby Mouse, Jennifer Holm treated readers to an original end.

The second reason I don’t like Dork Diaries is the main character. Even though author Rachel Russell didn’t exactly write in run-on sentences, I still felt as if as if Nikki would never shut up. Yes, Nikki is the main character and so should narrate the story, but most of the time she just endlessly spews random complaints with no basis in reality. Why does Nikki call herself a dork? She has loyal friends, gets attention from at least one guy, and likes to shop and party. Why does she ever doubt Brandon will ask her out? At the very least, why does she think he’ll ask out Mackenzie? He hangs around with Nikki, talks with Nikki, and acts like Nikki’s friend. Not once does he ever seriously talk to Mackenzie. Last, why does Mackenzie’s life revolve around ridiculing Nikki?

There are chick lit books which I love, such as My Unfair Godmother by Janette Rallison which differs from Dork Diaries on so many levels. For one thing, the main character gets herself into scrapes of her own making and then gets herself out of them by learning some lessons about sisters, boys, love, and life. As for the Wimpy Kid series, to which the Dork Diaries are compared, Greg might sometimes be a jerk but somehow his life feels a whole lot truer than Nikki’s.

My rating? Leave it: Don’t even take it off the shelves. Not recommended.

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This is your intrepid book blogger on the trail of another new book. My most recent find is Baby Mouse The Musical, by sister and brother team Jennifer and Matt Holm. I picked The Musical up on the recommendation of a former elementary student.

Being a graphical novel of a mere ninety pages, The Musical took less time for me to read than it took for me to eat my lunch. The so-so good news (for you) is that Baby Mouse and her woes are somewhat humorous. In a cute, clichéd way that is. The bad news (for me) is that reviewing The Musical was a challenge. In a new-to-me genre way, that is.

Art-heavy books call for the skills of a different type of critic. Yet with the increasing popularity of graphic novels, it seems time to move out of my comfort zone. And so your intrepid book blogger busily scoured the web for advice on how to, um, review graphic novels.

Turns out I’m not alone in my ignorance. Ironically, my search for articles on “how to review graphic novels” instead turned up countless posts with the sentence “I don’t know how to review a graphic novel.” Aarti at BookLust asks: Does one focus on the words or on the pictures?

If one focuses on the story, The Musical is an average story about a girl who wants to be a star but doesn’t know how to act. She meets an exotic new student (from England) who encourages her to try out for the school musical. Baby Mouse doesn’t get the part. And naturally the girl who does get the part despises Baby Mouse.

The execution of the story confused me. Expert reviewers of graphic novels can let me know if it was just me or if it’s truly the book. At any rate, one minute Baby Mouse is helping the new guy open his locker and the next she’s dreaming about being underground with the Phantom of the Locker. It took me three reads to realize that this is the excuse Baby Mouse dreamed up for not finishing her homework. In another scene, the gym teacher is talking about players attacking like “lions” and so Baby Mouse dreams up a chaotic sports version of The Lion King. I guess the execution makes sense — if you’re Walter Mitty.

In regards to the narration, there is an alarming trend in children’s movies these days to use cultural references as humor. Apparently, just by screaming WALTER MITTY, I should be able to make you laugh. (Did I? Maybe, if you know who he is. But if you’ve never heard of him my “joke” probably fell flat. Which, of course, is the problem with this kind of “humor.” FYI, Walter Mitty is a fictional character created by James Thurber who lapses frequently into a dream life.) And so besides the movies referred to in the previous paragraph, The Musical also references Annie, Fame, Grease, and at least a couple more which I couldn’t identify. Sadly, half the time these references are lost on their audience, who don’t know what in the world the author is babbling about. The other half of the time the references are just plain insulting, because such simple references are a lazy attempt at humor. It tells the world that being funny is just about how many lines from books, movies, or songs one can spout.

On the positive side, readers should readily relate to how Baby Mouse always seems to do everything wrong. In a fun way, Baby Mouse provides a role model by sticking with her goals and never giving up. I also loved the cute twist at the end.

If one focuses instead on the artwork, The Musical is most akin to comic strips. (It might come as no surprise then that comics and cartoons were a huge influence to Jennifer Holm during her childhood years.) the drawings are big, bold, and dauntingly pink with thick black outlines. No boy will touch the Baby Mouse books. Even some girls will find them overly girly. Otherwise, as Aarti at BookLust admits, “I can’t say much about how the artistry compares to other graphic novelists.”

Blogger Melissa Bell did actually some offer good advice: illustrate the review.

And so here you go!

My rating? Leave it: Don’t even take it off the shelves. Not recommended.

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The end of my thematic review months is coming to a close. Starting mid-May, I'll review an assortment of books.

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